Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY

Hi friends, welcome back to my page.  I have family over today, so posting really quickly.  🙂

Anyhow, welcome back to my fabulous web page.  A place where writers come to converse with one another and I use as my magical doorway to step into my writing friends imaginary worlds for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS!  (Did you read that with a wrestling announcers voice?  That’s what I was going for.)

Wondering who we are?  I’m glad you asked.

~We are a fabulous group of individuals that posts 8-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we “hop” around and leave comments on each other’s snippets.  We welcome EVERYONE’s comments.~

Here’s my bit, let me know what you think.  😉   (This one’s not out yet, still plugging away at it.)


Favian screamed.  “You think you’re so good right?  The only fact is that you weren’t too good to sleep with me and unfortunately for you, Adriana is my daughter.  Do you really think a judge is going to agree to this, about you taking her to the United States to live with some man who will take my place?”

“Go back to the house.”  Sebastian said loudly trying to move me away from the fence.

“They already did.”  I said while clenching my fists.  “I have all of the paperwork that I need with or without your approval.  I’m her mother and what I say goes.”


And that’s it.  I hope you enjoyed it.  Visit my Weekend Writing Warrior friends here.www

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Neva Squires-Rodriguez was born and raised in a neighborhood located on the North Side of Chicago. Mother, Wife, Expert at Multitasking... and now, Author and Columnist for Reflejos Newspaper, Neva creates electrifying stories with a twist. Neva Squires-Rodriguez earned her Masters Degree from National University, a feat which she worked very hard to obtain and says she will work even harder to pay off. She claims to be a typical American, full of dreams that will hopefully get her to a more comfortable lifestyle one day. She says, “God has a plan and I will follow wherever it is that He takes me.”
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11 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY

  1. chellecordero says:

    He’s just not going to give up, with or without legal documents I have a feeling that she has a fight on her hands.

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  2. Ed Hoornaert says:

    Good for her. She’s done what she can to take care of problems beforehand … not that I think she’ll succeed so easily.

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  3. Glad she has the paperwork, though it might take more than that to make this guy see reason, if he can. Love your passionate characters!

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  4. Frank Fisher says:

    It’s good that she has the paperwork, but I think this guy won’t give up without a fight. It’s so nice to see your snippets again, and this one’s full of drama!

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  5. Intense! Wow…I really need to know what’s going on here. And that’s good when you can inspire that kind of need to know in a reader. 🙂

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  6. Lorien Lyn says:

    Lots of tension in this snippet, but I enjoyed your character interaction.

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  7. Way to go, Neva. This story has power.

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  8. That’s quite a temper. I’d say his daughter may be better off without him!


  9. I’m with Chelle – I bet he won’t give up so easily, using legal means or otherwise. Lots of drama, intense snippet.


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