Welcome back to my fabulous web page. A place where writers come to converse with one another and I use as my magical doorway to step into my writing friends imaginary worlds for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS! (Did you read that with a wrestling announcers voice? That’s what I was going for.)
Wondering who we are? I’m glad you asked.
~We are a fabulous group of individuals that posts 8-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we “hop” around and leave comments on each other’s snippets. We welcome EVERYONE’s comments.~
Here’s my bit, let me know what you think. 😉 (This one’s not out yet, still plugging away at it.)
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The moment Gabrielle set eyes on Adriana, I knew there was no turning back. The two were inseparable. I smiled as I watched Gabrielle pushing Adriana on a swing at the side of the house.
“Isn’t that the cutest thing?” I asked my sister as we sat down for tea on the patio.
Liliana attempted a smile as she stared at me for a moment without saying anything, making me extremely nervous. By the way she studied my expression, I felt like she was looking into my soul.
“She doesn’t know, does she?” Liliana asked suddenly. “Have you told anyone that Adriana is actually your baby?”
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Something about Lilianna’s attitude bothers me, it’s like she is just waiting for a chance to say “I told you so” or maybe even spill the beans herself. She sounds very judgemental. Very intriguing.
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Intriguing excerpt. Makes me want to read more.
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I have a feeling this is all going to go south pretty quickly. I can’t wait! 🙂
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And now the true Liliana reveals herself. Hang on to your heart, dear girl. Good writing, Neva
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And there are always going to be the awkward questions….this is such a complex situation, excellent excerpt!
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Esperanza has so many dances she’s trying to do without falling down. And it seems Liliana is about ready to push her… It is nice the girls are getting along though. It might help soften the blow in other ways.
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Wow, that’s some secret!
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I don’t think her sister will be willing to keep this secret for too much longer!
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Awe, Adriana should know. I don’t think Liliana will tell though. Good 8, Neva! 🙂
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