Good day friends. As I write this weeks warrior post, I am sick out of my mind. My eyes are blurry from a bad cold and I wish that my nostrils were working. I’m telling you this, only because I’m a very odd person, who would like you to know everything about me. 🙂 (Little humor there.) Anyhow that being said, I would have to say that the hardest thing for me to ever do on Saturday mornings is to find “just” eight sentences to post for our Weekend Writing Warriors post, but let’s admit it is so fun to look for and when I find those eight, it’s like a light turns on and I think to myself, That’s it! Ever so happily.
This week was a little different. This snippet is from my book “Liliana”, just after Liliana and Antonio get married. You’re going to see that it’s not like anything else I’ve ever shown you and I’m slightly nervous about your reaction. I hope that you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it. Here it goes:
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“Antonio, stop.” I struggled to say. “Please stop.”
Tears filled my eyes and my body began to shake uncontrollably with fear.
He smiled but held his finger to his lips attempting to silence me. When my shaking and whimpering slowed down he began to move back and forth slowly. I felt like my body would break in half as I tried again to stop him. This time he didn’t pull back and just when I thought it couldn’t get any worse, he thrust his entire manhood inside me.
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NEVA SQUIRES-RODRIGUEZ 
Such a shame he couldn’t be gentle with her for what is obviously her first time. Shows a lot about the characters. Great 8.
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There was a very slight gentleness building up to it, but this was the killer moment. I’m sorry, I had so much trouble finding the eight, I just really want to tell you guys the whole story. 😉
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Neva, you’ve written eight sentences about a nightmare first night with a bridegroom. God save our daughters from such a man. Well done.
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You got it Charmaine, it was her first time! Those were some of the more intense lines.
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Oh dear, her first experience isn’t going so well. A vivid snippet.
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Hi Veronica. Yes you got it also, it was her first time. Kind of intense eight, hope you enjoyed it.
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Antonio, you’re a jackass!!! poor Liliana please don’t fall for him!!!… This book is so amazing. If I could press it into your hands and implore you to devour it like I did, I frigging would!! Liliana is THE Book to read in 2014!!!
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Oh you’re so awesome Tamara. I loved your book also. Oh that December, I just love her character! 🙂
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Well…wow…poor Liliana 😦 Antonio sounds like a major ass for not caring even remotely about how she feels or the pain she is experiencing.
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There’s more right around there, I mean he is an ass, but these sentences did make him look worse than ever. Can’t wait to start sharing book 2 with you guys. 😉
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I echo the sentiments in the other comments. What a jack-ass. But now I’m intrigued. I thought he was a nice guy, but maybe not? Are you going to try and redeem him? Or does she have to escape him and Columbia??? Good 8!
I just bought it on Amazon, but I’m not sure when I’ll get to it. 🙂 Busy days these are. 🙂
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Hey thanks Teresa, do let me know what you think of it when you read it. 🙂 I’m excited to hear your thoughts. This part of the book is a little crazy, but it really gets you ready for book 2, which is just super twisted. I’m writing book 3 now and I’m having a lot of fun with it b/c Liliana is really going to change her tune there. 😉
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Great snippet. It held my attention. I could feel the woman’s pain by the description of her body language. Your characters weren’t boring, and I hate Antonio (a good thing that I felt passion with only 8 sentences!)
Keep smiling,
Yawatta
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. You’d love the book also. 🙂
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