Hi friends, this week I’m sharing a little more from the Christmas story. I’m hoping that you’re enjoying it. Skipped ahead again. Hope you like it…
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“So is that what was bothering you last night?” I asked, growing impatient. I could see the line of coach passengers lining up now and from the looks of it, I was going to be last in line.
“No, that was part of it, but not the whole thing.” Tito said as he let out a long breath.
“Come on Tito, you’ve got to speed it up a little.” I said laughing. “My plane is about to take off and I’ve got to get on it before it takes off without me.”
Tito was quiet for a moment and I used the opportunity to prepare to stand up.
“Evaliz, I have something that I need to tell you before you leave and I’m not sure how it’s going to affect our relationship.”
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Oh no! Nothing like leaving it to the last minute to drop a bomb. I can’t wait to find out!
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Cliffhanger here. We’ll have to tune in next week. This is not sweet and fluffy time.
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What?!! He’s got to do this just as she’s about to board a plane? It’s gotta be important then. Nice way to leave us hanging. 🙂
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Thanks Christina! 🙂
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Sounds like what Tito has to say will change everything. I don’t think she should hear it before boarding the plane.
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Nice tease! Great job leaving us wanting more. 🙂
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I think she might miss her plane/bus/whatever.
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Cue tense music. *Dun DUN dun!* He sure picked the last minute to tell her, didn’t he?
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LOL, yes he did. 🙂
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Cliffhanger. I’m ready for next week’s installment.
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Thanks Jessica! 🙂
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Wow, Tito sure can pick his time for major revelations, can’t he? Great snippet!
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Thank you Veronica!
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Ooooohhhhh no! You can’t leave us hanging like that! Neva, you are a story-tease! lol
Really good writing. The back and forth felt very real, very natural.
Sheesh, I wonder what he has to tell her that will be of such magnitude. 🙂
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Hey, thanks. Glad you like it. It’s available for download now. Check it out. Free with Kindle Unlimited, or only .99 cents for the download. 😉 http://amzn.to/1O8ca4b
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