Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY

Hi friends, this week I’m sharing a little more from the Christmas story.  I’m hoping that you’re enjoying it.  Skipped ahead again.  Hope you like it…

And now it’s time for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS!  (I wish I could make that just blink or something to show just how exciting it is to me.)

Wondering who we are?  We are a fabulous group of individuals that posts 8-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we “hop” around and leave comments on each other’s snippets.  We welcome EVERYONE’s comments.~


“So is that what was bothering you last night?”  I asked, growing impatient.  I could see the line of coach passengers lining up now and from the looks of it, I was going to be last in line.

“No, that was part of it, but not the whole thing.”  Tito said as he let out a long breath.

“Come on Tito, you’ve got to speed it up a little.”  I said laughing.  “My plane is about to take off and I’ve got to get on it before it takes off without me.”

Tito was quiet for a moment and I used the opportunity to prepare to stand up.

“Evaliz, I have something that I need to tell you before you leave and I’m not sure how it’s going to affect our relationship.”


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Neva Squires-Rodriguez was born and raised in a neighborhood located on the North Side of Chicago. Mother, Wife, Expert at Multitasking... and now, Author and Columnist for Reflejos Newspaper, Neva creates electrifying stories with a twist. Neva Squires-Rodriguez earned her Masters Degree from National University, a feat which she worked very hard to obtain and says she will work even harder to pay off. She claims to be a typical American, full of dreams that will hopefully get her to a more comfortable lifestyle one day. She says, “God has a plan and I will follow wherever it is that He takes me.”
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15 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors #8SUNDAY

  1. Kim Magennis says:

    Oh no! Nothing like leaving it to the last minute to drop a bomb. I can’t wait to find out!

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  2. Cliffhanger here. We’ll have to tune in next week. This is not sweet and fluffy time.

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  3. What?!! He’s got to do this just as she’s about to board a plane? It’s gotta be important then. Nice way to leave us hanging. 🙂


  4. Frank Fisher says:

    Sounds like what Tito has to say will change everything. I don’t think she should hear it before boarding the plane.


  5. Lorien Lyn says:

    Nice tease! Great job leaving us wanting more. 🙂


  6. Ed Hoornaert says:

    I think she might miss her plane/bus/whatever.


  7. Cue tense music. *Dun DUN dun!* He sure picked the last minute to tell her, didn’t he?

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  8. jessehanna says:

    Cliffhanger. I’m ready for next week’s installment.

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  9. Wow, Tito sure can pick his time for major revelations, can’t he? Great snippet!

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  10. Ooooohhhhh no! You can’t leave us hanging like that! Neva, you are a story-tease! lol

    Really good writing. The back and forth felt very real, very natural.

    Sheesh, I wonder what he has to tell her that will be of such magnitude. 🙂

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