Hi friends, welcome back to my page. I had a fabulous road trip to New York last weekend, but so glad to be back home now! In spite of all the fun, there is just no place like home.
Anyhow, welcome back to my fabulous web page. A place where writers come to converse with one another and I use as my magical doorway to step into my writing friends imaginary worlds for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS! (Did you read that with a wrestling announcers voice? That’s what I was going for.)
Wondering who we are? I’m glad you asked.
~We are a fabulous group of individuals that posts 8-10 sentences on their blogs from a published or unpublished book. Then we “hop” around and leave comments on each other’s snippets. We welcome EVERYONE’s comments.~
Here’s my bit, let me know what you think. 😉 (This one’s not out yet, still plugging away at it.)
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“You know damn well what family I’m talking about!” Favian screamed. “Esperanza is still my wife.”
That did it, I had to come forward. I walked to the gate and stood next to Sebastian, despite him holding up his hand as I approached.
“Go back to the house Esperanza.” Sebastian said.
“No, I’m not going to standby and listen to this man leave a lasting impression on my family.” I said, leaning toward the fence and eyeing Favian. “My family, you’re not my family Favian they are!”
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There’s always lots of emotions in your snippets, Neva.
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Feisty woman! Favian had better pay attention.
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Uh oh! I thought maybe things would start to calm down but she’s not going to stand for Favian’s nonsense. Good for her!
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Yes, she’s not having it that’s for sure! 🙂
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She stood up for herself and her family. Terrific snippet, Neva.
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Thank you Charmaine!
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Well she sure told him! Although I have a feeling there will be more arguing….emotional snippet!
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Yes and have a twist coming too. Trying to get to it quickly. 🙂
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I like the fact that she showed some strength there instead of just being told to go hide.
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Thank you! 🙂
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She’s got a hot head. It runs in the family, though. 🙂
I saw some of your pics from NYC. Bravo! I’m glad you got your getaway. 🙂
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Thank you, yes it was a wonderful time! I can’t believe how much we saw in the short time that we were there. 🙂
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No one really wants to hear her speak, do they? But I think she might have something to say…
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