Hi friends, I realize I’m posting super early, however I’m expecting a busy weekend. I’m hoping all of you enjoy your weekend to the fullest and I look forward to checking in with you on Sunday. 🙂 Be safe!
Now, let’s get right down to business! 🙂 It’s time for fireworks with the Weekend Writing Warriors…
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“Listen Esperanza.” Tylen said without blinking. “I can understand how you feel. I mean you were practically raised as an orphan. If your sister and her husband didn’t step in and take you in, your life would have been much different. I understand that you’re appreciative of that and want to do what you feel is right for your cousins daughter.”
I stared at him, wondering if it was possible that I knew where he was going with this.
“I realize how strongly you must feel about this.” Tylen continued. “You didn’t question me when I brought my own children to live with us and you’ve done nothing but treat Gabrielle and John as if they were your own, I was wrong for what I said last night.
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You’ve left this reader hanging, Neva. In a good way since he appears to be heading in the right direction. Nice scene. So real.
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Tylen seems quite understanding and a nice guy, interesting excerpt from this complicated story!
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He knows a lot about her background, which implies a long and/or deep relationship.
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I am so intrigued. I have to find time to read this!
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Sounds like he might be coming around. I wonder how much he knows? Fascinating story!
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I really hope she can make some peace with Tylen. Not because I think he’s a great guy… I think he’s trying to be a great guy, but because she’ll feel better about herself if she does.
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Wow, I don’t think she quite expected that apparent acceptance – but I do wonder how much he really knows. Great scene, very realistic.
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