Hello friends. I’m so excited to read what everyone wrote this weekend. I’m such a nerd, but you make my weekends. 🙂 I love spending my Saturday nights preparing my posts (seriously) Today was a long day and the weather is warm in Chicago-land-> meaning above freezing. We are currently above 38, which is exciting in January. Spring is almost here! Can you imagine the imaginary back-flips that I have been doing?
Oh really quick, check this out:
It’s a paper copy of my column. So exciting!!! You can check any of my future columns out in Reflejos Newspaper and they “up’d” me from bi-weekly to weekly. Yay, Here’s the link.
Now let’s get down to business and see what’s going on in this scene that I’ve been sharing with you, I think I’m going to skip ahead next week to get you more of the story.
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“You heard me Lilly.” Antonio said, “I think it’s best if you go, before you create any more embarrassment for my family.”
“Embarrassment?” I asked.
Antonio wasn’t listening. Instead he was going through the bag and pulling out clothes that I instantly recognized as the clothes that I had left my fathers house with before we were married. My bottom lip began to quiver. He threw me my old house robe, but I didn’t reach out to catch in time and it and it landed at my feet.
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NEVA SQUIRES-RODRIGUEZ 
Well, you’ve really set up a bad situation for poor Lilly. I hope she can get through to Antonio very soon. Congratulations on your column promotion- how exciting!
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Way cool with your column and promo, girl! As for the snippet, it makes me want to do evil things to Antonio.
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He is such a crazy, selfish, s.o.b.! I wish she had the courage to go back to the USA… I never imagined the story would take this nasty of a turn. Poor Liliana…
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Congrats on the column, Neva!
Poor Lilly. She deserves better than that.
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So happy for you that the column went weekly already! I felt sorry for your heroine in today’s scene, so uncomfortable ( but that’s because you depicted it so well). Excellent 8!
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First off, congrats not only on your column, but on being made a weekly columnist! That’s great! Congratulations!
This was a great 8. It’s very intriguing. The emotions are palpable; the scene played out perfectly in my mind. It leaves me wanting more. Very well done!
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Wow, I’m super curious. This guy seems like a jerk.
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Would it be terribly rude of me to call Antonio a world-class B***tard? Wow, I really do feel for Liliana, but it does sound like she would be better off without him. Great snippet.
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