Hi friends, welcome back to my page. I have family over today, so posting really quickly. 🙂
Anyhow, welcome back to my fabulous web page. A place where writers come to converse with one another and I use as my magical doorway to step into my writing friends imaginary worlds for WEEKEND WRITING WARRIORS! (Did you read that with a wrestling announcers voice? That’s what I was going for.)
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Here’s my bit, let me know what you think. 😉 (This one’s not out yet, still plugging away at it.)
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Favian screamed. “You think you’re so good right? The only fact is that you weren’t too good to sleep with me and unfortunately for you, Adriana is my daughter. Do you really think a judge is going to agree to this, about you taking her to the United States to live with some man who will take my place?”
“Go back to the house.” Sebastian said loudly trying to move me away from the fence.
“They already did.” I said while clenching my fists. “I have all of the paperwork that I need with or without your approval. I’m her mother and what I say goes.”
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NEVA SQUIRES-RODRIGUEZ 
He’s just not going to give up, with or without legal documents I have a feeling that she has a fight on her hands.
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Good for her. She’s done what she can to take care of problems beforehand … not that I think she’ll succeed so easily.
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Glad she has the paperwork, though it might take more than that to make this guy see reason, if he can. Love your passionate characters!
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It’s good that she has the paperwork, but I think this guy won’t give up without a fight. It’s so nice to see your snippets again, and this one’s full of drama!
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Thanks Frank! Good to see you, where have you been hiding? I’ve been looking out for your post….
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I have a post out today. In it i explain where i’ve been the last few months
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Intense! Wow…I really need to know what’s going on here. And that’s good when you can inspire that kind of need to know in a reader. 🙂
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Lots of tension in this snippet, but I enjoyed your character interaction.
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Way to go, Neva. This story has power.
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That’s quite a temper. I’d say his daughter may be better off without him!
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I’m with Chelle – I bet he won’t give up so easily, using legal means or otherwise. Lots of drama, intense snippet.
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